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i hate the numbing feeling
its when you want to feel something
and you feel disconnected even from your friends in the moment
and its hard to feel things, even if you like pinch yourself

you feel like its hard to feel love or anything like that
in moments like that you want to be mad or sad cause at least your feeling something
you lose interest in stuff you love
losing interest…

why can't i find it anymore? find the happiness i felt moments before
you long for the bittersweet feeling of sadness, the risk of anger
thats a feeling and what i am feeling right now
So I was texting my friend when I was in a bad mood, and she pointed out to me that the first verse was poem like. So being me, I decided to continue it. Tell me what you think!
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Sjemenka Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is very introspective. I like the serious approach :)
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puddlethecat Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D It helped I wrote this after I felt this way...
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Sjemenka Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that's really great about writing. It feels so much better after voicing the issues :D
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puddlethecat Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ikr, i don't know what i would do without it ....
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BetterScarletMystery Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what I call dissociation... Yeah it can suck...
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I'm getting help to figure out what I have . ( PTSD or a simple anxiety problem)
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:iconbetterscarletmystery:
BetterScarletMystery Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Or a dissociation disorder, like I have? Idk?
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm pretty sure its an anxiety problem, but that is a possibility.
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:iconbetterscarletmystery:
BetterScarletMystery Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Whatever is the cause, it still sucks...
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shep4life Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well done! Explained well
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I tried to capture that moment best I could
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shep4life Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Good job
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LadyOfFrost Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This happens quite a lot of the time, actually. I really like this poem. Clap 
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yayyyyyyyyyyy! I'm glad you enjoy it! :D (Big Grin) Meow :3 
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LindaBostic Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I share your numbness & itz good.
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puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The numbness is good? I find it not very good personally..
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LindaBostic Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
your poem is good
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OHHH okay , I was gonna say ; numbness is fun for no one :3
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Yuesumi Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The last paragraph could just be the lyrics of a song... It's very beautiful and deep. :heart:
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww , thank you sooo sooo much! Thats so sweet of you to say <3
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Yuesumi Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome :heart:
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gummi-bearsteve Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS by far is my favorite poem from you! Really well done. Good pacing and emotion. GREAT JOB!!! :pat:
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thank you! I hope I'm improving bit by bit.. :D
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gummi-bearsteve Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you are!!! Keep it up!!! :pat:
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puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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JennSilent Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
I know that feeling....
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, doesn't it suck?
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JennSilent Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Student Writer
yeah...
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
Hug 
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Meow :3 :D (Big Grin) 
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